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Draft 1

 https://youtu.be/8B2PGkwcjR8?si=IcqyFlPQ9p6DrDc-

Draft 1 - kind of ran out of footage after around 2 min - need to redo the end - also need to factor in time for animation  

Home page so far 

Start of my about page

Rough draft of my merch page

NEA progress

 

All original images 

Been editing on caput at home - need to reshoot to include scenes with more match cuts and more dynamic shots currently a bit too repetitive. 
 

NEA progress

 

Made a logo - took images of different fonts I could find in my room.

Made a pop up box advertising a London gig. Tried to make it look like a postcard.

Used original images of letters I've made.

Made a footer

original image

Original image taken in my room then made it into a png.

original image + original image of stars used

Album covers

Tour date section (in the works) need to pick a better fonts and colours & add hover & click features. I used images i've taken to make polaroids.

Music Video:

• I've cut down the length of the song/vid to 3 min 40 need to cut down more
• started planning my animation section - i'm screenshotting and editing each frame currently at home - will print out and start animating soon
• need to cut down length of clips and put more dynamic shots in

bookmarked

 Music vids I like:

Dean blunt - Good use of camcorder & simple concept

curiosa - Also a simple but effective concept

eyedress

not actually a music video - not actually a music video but is shot really nicely

weird fishes mixed media - very cool use of mixed media animation especially at 1.31 (i think i'll steal that shot) - can cover up bad shots

contact sheets

 

Police brutality in film - La Haine & Do the Right Thing - film club ppt

 https://southendhighschoolforgirls-my.sharepoint.com/:p:/g/personal/19-akar_shsg_org/ERTyUxUQ0dFPqnHzyXWwRE8B8GkMrBDQtavybCLNdZP6LQ?e=2l2DgU