Teacher feedback :
Aurora: Music Video; Mood Ring Baby
- very carefully thought out interpretation, nice to see the lyrics so extensively annotated.
- Mood ring merch on the website?
- Like the symbolism aspect.
- 'seducing the moon' great lyric.
- good how you are linking to your Eng lit studies.
- great film intertextuality.
- surrealism is an interesting idea- how will you incorporate this?
- 30 seconds: interview of artist- like the idea of shooting in the museum.
- camera work is a bit shaky, some interesting choices of locations but you need to use a tripod and think about framing more closely. It is fine to use some shaky hand held but you also need some more composed shots to 'prove' that you can shoot straight!Student feedback
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